Well, here goes:
Zoe is part of a highly secret band of assassins/spies. Despite the fact that she is a girl and much smaller then most of her class mates, she quickly climbed to the top. Her biggest competition at the time was Nick, a arrogant boy who was at the head of the class, even though he hardly ever practiced. Why should he? Nobody was even close to his test scores. Until a quiet little girl with pale skin and black hair utterly beats him. And not just at stealth or one of the other classes girls normally excelled at.
In a fight.
She stepped into the ring with her two little daggers and beat him at swordplay, the very thing he thought was his best skill.
To make it worse, the Commander happened to be watching that day. He saw the ease that Zoe took down the top student in her class and transferred her to spar with the older group of student who had recently graduated. Those began a life long competition between Nick and Zoe.
Now, the Commander sends them on a mission together. It isn't the first mission they've been on together, but they'd never really gotten to know each other. Things keep popping up on the mission and they are hitting a little to closer to home for Zoe's comfortable.
Now she just has to complete the mission and keep Nick from finding out her darkest secret and uncovering her painful childhood that she has kept hidden all these years.
What do you guys think? Would you consider reading my story?